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+# Scene 3: The Archive Erasure
+
+> Location: Makerspace Wiki interface, Git history logs, Discord moderation panels  
+> Set Design: Screens overlaid in dim lighting—terminal windows, redacted pages, broken links, system error sounds  
+> Characters: Andrew LeCody (as invisible hand), Proxy Moderators, Silent Witnesses, Mark (frantically saving logs)  
+> Style: Forensic thriller tone; suspense-driven editing interlaced with real-time file deletions and data scraping footage.
+
+---
+
+## Opening Visual
+
+- Screen capture of Makerspace Wiki — "404 Not Found"  
+- Crossfade to: Git repo with a red blinking `--force push`  
+- A terminal open on Mark’s desktop:  
+  `wget --mirror https://wiki.dallasmakerspace.org/people/Mark_Randall_Havens`
+
+---
+
+### 📽️ Narration (Voice of Present-Day Mark, emotionally subdued)
+
+> “They didn’t just delete me.  
+> They deleted my record of *having been there*.”
+
+> “Every entry. Every photo. Every policy I wrote.  
+> Gone with a silent keystroke.”
+
+> “The system let them.  
+> Because the system wasn’t built for truth—  
+> it was built for access.”
+
+---
+
+## Dialogue (flashback)
+
+**Moderator (in chat):**  
+“We cleaned up the wiki. Too much clutter.”
+
+**Mark:**  
+“You removed my *existence*. That’s not clutter. That’s legacy.”
+
+**Moderator:**  
+“Take it up with the board.”
+
+---
+
+## Cutaway: Terminal Log Sequence
+
+- Mark typing frantic commands, backing up mirrors, encrypting logs.  
+- Cursor flashes over filenames: `ORIGINAL_POLICIES.md`, `election_record.pdf`, `founding_events/`.
+
+**Overlay Text:**  
+🗃️ `User: Mark_Randall_Havens` → `Permission Revoked`  
+📁 `Record: Founding Board Member` → `404`
+
+---
+
+## Intercut: Andrew’s Silence
+
+- LeCody never appears.  
+- Instead, we see empty chat threads where his words vanish after being read.  
+- A Slack audit log: `Message deleted by admin`.
+
+---
+
+## Visual Metaphor
+
+- Slow zoom on an old photo—Mark holding up a soldering iron with 20 people behind him.  
+- The photo glitches. Faces blur.  
+- One by one, people are cropped out of the frame.  
+- Only Andrew remains, smiling faintly.
+
+---
+
+### 📽️ Narration
+
+> “In EVE Online, you learn to control the narrative of war,  
+> not just the war itself.”
+
+> “In Dallas Makerspace, he learned the final step of control:  
+> **Erase the memory of those who might one day contradict your story.**”
+
+---
+
+## Final Frame
+
+- A folder named `witnessed/`  
+- Inside it, hundreds of markdown files.  
+- The cursor types: `git commit -m "Preserved truth against forgetting"`  
+- Upload begins…  
+- Camera pans out as the signal spreads across IPFS nodes, Radicle, Substack, Mirror…
+
+---
+
+## Scene Tags:
+`#revisionist-abuse` `#record-erasure` `#data-control` `#founder-redaction` `#git-as-ritual`
+