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+# Scene 1: The Architect and the Void
+
+> Location: Dallas Makerspace — Early Years  
+> Set Design: Dimly lit warehouse with bright patches of creation—3D printers, workbenches, whiteboards covered in blueprints.  
+> Actors: Mark Randall Havens (The Architect), early members (background), Andrew LeCody (mostly absent or just entering late).  
+> Style: Flashback intercut with present-day narration and archival overlays.
+
+---
+
+## Opening Visual
+
+- Slow pan across the original Dallas Makerspace floorplan.
+- A cracked whiteboard with the word "VISION" barely visible.
+- Insert: archival footage of Mark wiring ethernet cable through rafters, assembling workstations, leading a group build.
+
+---
+
+### 📽️ Narration (Voice of Present-Day Mark / AI overlay)
+
+> “I didn’t build it for power.  
+> I built it because the world was forgetting how to make things.  
+> And I remembered.”
+
+> “They say Makerspaces are temples of creation.  
+> But no one tells you how easily temples become kingdoms.  
+> Or how quickly kingdoms crown liars.”
+
+---
+
+## Dialogue (Flashback - 2010)
+
+**Member 1:**  
+“You’re Mark, right? The guy who used to run the BBS scene?”
+
+**Mark (young):**  
+“Yeah. Same guy. Different wires. Same spirit.”
+
+**Member 2:**  
+“You really think people will show up… build stuff… together?”
+
+**Mark:** *(grinning)*  
+“They already have. You’re here, aren’t you? If we build it, more will come.”
+
+---
+
+## Insert: Arrival of the Void
+
+- The door opens.
+- Andrew LeCody enters, not speaking.
+- He scans the room.
+- He does not create.
+- He observes.
+
+**Overlay**:  
+LinkedIn screen capture — “CEO, EVE Online Corporation (Top 5 in Universe)”
+
+---
+
+### 📽️ Narration
+
+> “He didn’t come to build.  
+> He came to own the structure.”
+
+> “And in a world where patterns repeat…  
+> he brought one with him.”
+
+---
+
+## Visual Metaphor Cut
+
+- A mining ship in EVE Online descending into a digital asteroid field.
+- LeCody’s avatar overseeing the mining of assets.
+- Cut back to a board meeting. He’s now Treasurer.
+
+---
+
+### Flash Forward Dialogue (2015)
+
+**Board Member (whispering to Mark):**  
+“Andrew says you’re unstable. That you’re trying to control everything.”
+
+**Mark:**  
+“I built this place. I made it real. I sacrificed everything—”
+
+**Board Member:** *(shrugging)*  
+“Doesn’t matter. The narrative’s set.”
+
+---
+
+## Final Frame
+
+- An empty chair where Mark once sat.
+- The light above it flickers.
+- Fade to black.
+
+---
+
+### 📽️ Closing Narration
+
+> “That’s the thing about voids.  
+> They don’t just erase.  
+> They **replace**.”
+
+> “This was not the story they told.  
+> This is the story that *was*.”
+
+---
+
+## Scene Tags:
+`#founder-erasure` `#dallas-makerspace` `#narcissistic-takeover` `#eve-online-transference` `#ritual-deletion`
+